Showing posts with label Adventure. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Adventure. Show all posts

Monday, January 13, 2025

Author, Character "coming of age"

 Author, character "coming of age"

Author Donan Berg in "Lucia's Fantasy World" creates a story that follows a young girl, Lucia, as she learns of her full potential while experiencing coming-of-age moments while trying to rescue a sick friend facing death. (Literary Titan, Five Stars)

When asked for his inspiration, Author Donan Berg expanded upon his own childhood. He said a phrase and the experience of having no crayons when starting first grade stood out.

The phrase, he attributed to the Orient, was: "Fall down seven times, stand up eight."

His first-grade experience required a little background.

He recounted that he'd spent six months with his mother and brother in Ireland, the country of his birth, before he and his mother had, years before, joined her husband and his father in the United States heartland.  As a rambunctious five-year-old in Ireland, he'd played with cousins and explored the creek that flowed through the garden behind his grandmother's candy store. In doing so, he'd missed kindergarten in the United States. 

On returning to his hometown to begin first grade, he learned that his classmates had in kindergarten received a new box of sixteen crayons to be carried over for use in first grade. Thus, in his having missed kindergarten, he had no box of crayons. To compensate, his first-grade teacher removed a crayon discard box from a windowsill and gave it to him for his exclusive personal use.

To this day, he can still recall his fellow students teasing him for having to use stubby crayons without sharpened points.

However, he was happy. He took pleasure in the positive.

While his classmates had only one crayon of each color, he laid out and counted six reds, eight greens, et cetera, many more crayons than the sixteen his classmates were limited to.

Years later, he adopted his youthful experience in Lucia's Fantasy World. Lucia, although her parents are split, has basic needs fulfilled. She has shelter in an apartment, food enough not to starve, and enough clothing to keep her warm. Although she might not be a school "glamor" girl, she has fun snow sledding with Johnny. He shares his sled and doesn't complain his one leg is in a metal brace. 

Yet, in her own mind, Lucia longs for material things her mother can't afford, especially a Christmas tree. Friend Omar has access to multiple Christmas trees as a Boy Scout working at a site that sells trees to support his troop, however, he can't just give her a tree.

Lucia is forced to rely on her own determination, to build a trust in her own ability, and to learn the value of human relationships. In her journey, the fantasy world she encounters and conquers teaches her lessons of survival and exposes her to values applicable to her physical world. The experience also brings forth her hidden talent.

Was she wrong to long for material things like a Christmas tree?  No. Lucia's desires are, by themselves, neither right nor wrong. It's the pathway to understanding one's morality and the relationship to others that's important. 

As Author Donan Berg would explain, material items like crayons have no intrinsic value beyond coloring, yet sometimes they do. The item gives the youth who is given it but one perspective on their place in society and the world at large. Society promotes a standard. You're given a box of crayons. You're to be limited to this box.

But are you?

What if you can achieve the same or greater artistry with discards? 

What if anything does the discard tell us? What role does human determination play? Shouldn't it require us to do better than good?

Check out history. Well along in the advance of civilization, man communicated by chiseling images on rock. How troubled would we all be if one minor error in what we sought to express required us to begin again with a new rock, a new boulder?

Then again, how often are we advised to wipe the slate clean?

A conundrum? Yes. Is there one in Lucia's Fantasy World? (www.authorsden.com/visit/viewwork.asp?id=79192 or an e-book at www.smashwords.com/books/view/1142569)

Yes. Yet, to read Lucia's Fantasy World may personally help.

 





Wednesday, July 7, 2021

Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel wins Gold Award

 Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel

Wins Literary Titan Gold Award

Just announced:  Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel, has won the July 2021 Literary Titan Gold Award.

(Note, a prior blog post presented their June 25 five-star book review of Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel.)

Literary Titan bestows its Gold Award on books found to be perfect in delivery of original content, meticulous development of unique characters in an organic and striking setting with an innovative plot that supports a fresh theme with words transformed into beautifully written prose.

Author Donan Berg was quoted as saying he was humbled and honored to be recognized by an organization of professional editors, writers, and professors with a passion for the written word.



 



Wednesday, June 30, 2021

Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel Five-Star Review

 Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel

 Find the Girl by Donan Berg immerses us in the whimsical story of Eta Dorcas. Eta’s world opens with a shocking discovery; after a trip to local caves with her grandma and younger sister Daria, Eta’s fingers suddenly begin to glow a bright blue. This shocks her – but she’s even more surprised to find that a creature has snuck into her backpack and escaped the cave with Eta and her family. We learn that the creature is a weasel who once lived as Eighteenth-Century Sailor, trapped in his animal form by a vicious curse.

 Find the Girl takes a magical turn into an expansive world where anything is possible. Eta and Ian, the boy-become-weasel, are suddenly entangled in a quest to free Ian from the curse that’s been put upon him by Greek seafarers. This quest leaves him with three important words: find the girl. We travel around the world and through time with the protagonists as they encounter different trials and creatures, challenging them to discover a cure for the curse before time runs out.

 This book was such a fun read. Eta’s voice is entertaining and joyful despite the strenuous trials she faces, and I loved seeing this magical world from her perspective. The bond she forms with Ian felt genuine and touching, and I found them both to be nuanced characters with relatable emotions among the fantastical setting. I enjoyed that the story left some open avenues where future tales could develop further from this intricate and well-constructed universe.

 I found the world presented in Find the Girl so unique. It was unlike any fantasy stories I’ve read previously, and I loved the specialized voice that came along with this brand-new view. However, I did find the beginning confusing as we’re thrust into this magical world without much description. Berg makes up for the heavy information by providing, detailed fantastical occurrences later in the story, as we meet new characters who give more context to the universe that’s been constructed.

 If you’re looking for a joyful and inspiring story that’s great for all ages, Find the Girl is your next perfect read. The story emphasizes how special it is to embrace wonder and change. It shows that when we care for one another and have the passion to help them, we might discover beautiful corners of the world along the way.

Literary Titan/Thomas Anderson

Literary Titan is an organization of professional editors, writers, and professors that have a passion for the written word.

Friday, April 2, 2021

Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel, Ranks Most Popular

 Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel 

is now available on Amazon (ASIN B091FZBQTG)

in both E-book and paperback.

    It is free to all who have KindleUnlimited.

    Click to Purchase Find the Girl fantasy novel here

    Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel most popular.

    Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel has earned the Number One

ranking as the most popular in fantasy and all other genres since April 16, 2021.

    Click here to read a sample chapter Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel sample.

    Or, read an excerpt in an earlier post on this blog site.




Friday, February 19, 2021

Coming Soon: Fantasy 'Find the Girl'

 Coming soon in 2021 from Author Donan Berg.

The countdown to a fantasy adventure has begun.

 Find the Girl

Seventh grader Eta Dorcas captures a weasel in an Iowa cave.

The weasel speaks.

      And, more.

      Eta’s fingertips glow blue and she dares not tell Dad, Grandma, sister Daria, nor brother Nathan.

Ian, a seventeen-year-old sailor in the 1800s, is cursed to live as a 21st Century weasel unless he collects the silver, gold, and pearl spelled out by an anagram: ‘Find the Girl.’

Eta doesn’t believe she has magical powers. Yet, she’s an empowering spirit as she and Ian propel themselves on three separate trips to 1859 Greece, Ireland and the Mississippi River. The adventures blend harrowing intrigue, bond-building, and enlightenment without romance as Ian’s collectibles are not freely given. Eta’s family dynamics build and reveal her empathy.


Read a sample:

Chapter One

Eta Dorcas feared that, if she looked at her fingers, it would still be there. Seated in a minivan’s second row, she twiddled her thumbs. After a peek, she prayed for a miracle.

“Are you buckled in?”

“Yes, Grandma.”

As Grandma drove toward home, Eta steadied her gaze on the crown of Daria’s head as her younger sister sat pinned to the family minivan front seat by the stretched seat harness.

“Mares’ tails and mackerel scales make lofty ships to carry low sails.”

“What’s that, Grandma?” Daria asked.

“Old saying your Grandpa often repeated ever since we meet to warn of foul weather coming.”

Eta had studied clouds in last year’s seventh grade. Her gaze beyond the minivan’s side window failed to discern or gather enough wispy threads to even imagine in the Eastern Iowa clouds the outline of a horse, any fish, or a 19th Century sailing ship. Swallowing hard, she stared at her right hand’s closed fist and the exposed knuckles that rested on her seated thigh.

She closed her eyes and counted inside her head.

When she reached ten, she opened her eyes and her right fist to expose her right hand fingertips to her full view.

She gasped. The skin beneath her four right-hand fingernails glowed blue. As if by magic, the blue tint had traveled from the right forefinger to her pinkie.

Her feeling no pain reminded her that five months ago her seventh-grade teacher, Miss Slayton, convinced all, except dorky Stephen Jessup, that in the vacuum of outer space a human’s scream wouldn’t be heard.

If Eta could peer through narrowed eyes into the future, would she one day be floating beyond the earth’s atmosphere in an astral plane, her skin aglow like stratosphere plasma? If she time-traveled into the 19th Century, would a pirate force her to walk the plank from a captured merchant clipper ship, condemned to Davy Jones’ Locker by a swirling sea?

Or, within the next thirty minutes, before they arrived home, would a tornado uplift the minivan, ala Dorothy, and propel her through the western horizon’s dense black clouds?

“Eta, you all right?” Grandma asked.

“Fine,” Eta lied. To convince Grandma she was, Eta asked, “Was Grandpa a sailor?”

“Aye.” Grandma chuckled. “True and true.”

Eta wiggled her left-hand forefinger. Unable to stop the blue pigment from discoloring the pale flesh beneath her unpainted fingernail, a deepening dread engulfed Eta that she’d either be an Avatar, a Smurf, or dead within the week.

Daria asked, “Did I ever know Grandpa?”

“No, dear. Before either of you were born, no diver found him after his boat swamped near Ross Island, Ireland.”

Eta, locked into her own evolving catastrophe, haphazardly listened to, but did not join, the front-seat conversation.

“Did you live in Ireland, Grandma?”

“No. We lived outside Athens, near the port. Grandpa sailed the Mediterranean Sea and the Atlantic to the British Isles.”

“Was he a pirate?”

Grandma chuckled a second time. “No, no. Just a sailor who I’ll always remember for sending me a lovely pearl necklace.”

“Will you show it to me?”

Eta watched Grandma shake her head.

“Sorry to say,” Grandma whispered, “Lost it. Wanted to pass it on to your mother, but, then one day, discovered I’d misplaced the necklace and then . . . and then your mother passed.”

“I remember Mom wore pearls.”

“Daria, honey, let’s save this for another day.”

Eta agreed as she continued to stare at her cupped fingers. Why did the creepy blue glow skip her thumbs? Would the blue disappear if she scrubbed her fingertips with a toothbrush loaded up with hand sanitizer after she arrived home?

Since today was Daria’s birthday, Grandma granted her ten-year-old granddaughter two wishes. The first was a Saturday trip to the Mississippi River caves near Dubuque, Iowa, and the second, a round-trip privilege to sit in the front passenger seat.

For once, Eta didn’t whine on the trip home about having to buckle into the middle seat for it made it easier to hide her fingertip’s blue glow since older brother Nathan had begged to stay home while Dad left the farm for work.

Eta bent head and shoulders forward to escape Grandma’s rearview mirror detection as she let both lips seal her left forefinger within her mouth. Since a hard suck didn’t result in dizziness, she sucked again without breaking the seal of her lips.

“Eta, you ill?”

Grandma’s inquiry ignited a shudder within and through Eta’s nervous system. Eta’s lips released her finger. “There’s a bug on the floor.”

“Stomp it.”

Eta’s right sneaker kicked the seatback in front of her. “Got it.” Her second lie, she believed, no less punishable than her first.

Thank you for your read. The full story of Eta's fantastic voyage coming soon.

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