Tuesday, December 21, 2021

Five-Star Review - A Body To Bones

 

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Donan Berg’s A Body To Bones offers an enthralling mystery that is evocatively embedded in middle-American small town life of the 1960s. Berg’s ability to draw the reader completely into this Iowa town, using the Tom Hamilton’s local newspaper as both the historical and social heartbeat of community, makes this novel stand out from most in the genre.
Yes, the presence of hidden bones in a factory provide intrigue that will carry the reader through the deftly crafted plot, but it is the immersion in the small-town of fifty years ago that makes the work such a pleasure. Berg knows how to develop characters. The shady lawyer George Windhurst is folksy hoot, constantly cajoling Tom and others in ways that can be alternately effective and incompetent. Myron is also memorable, a young dreamer who is navigating both the careful construction of a glider and a wholesome romance with Wanda. And Wanda is another live wire, whom Berg described, “She lives at home to save money for her dreams, not yet completely defined, which include stylish clothes.”
The village gossip and the expanding discoveries about the bones give the novel other layers of intrigue, as does a lurid history connected to the priest Father Cornelius Murphy. While Tom’s wife Sarah (with her reticence and her secrets) certainly is the emotional and moral locus of the novel, so many other characters contribute both curious theories and discoveries. Indeed, A Body To Bones is American Gothic as an entertaining ensemble play.
As a local resident explained about the increasingly disturbing revelations, “It’s been too gruesome around here lately. All the black humor.” Such is the nature of a novel that will grippingly propel forward right through to its satisfying conclusion. So I highly recommend you pick up A Body To Bones as much for the neighbors you get to visit as for the mystery they have to solve.
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Friday, October 15, 2021

The Tune of Youth

 

The Tune of Youth

Down by the sea, the strand

Marched the three, a piper band.

Rhythm strong, the notes low and high,

Bellows rocked the musical staff ay and bye.

The melody called out to the sky, the sea.

Gather the fishes to feast, let Poseidon be.

Local fishermen on the diamond sand

Remember the crabs’ wild dance on land.

Balanced vertical on one claw, pointed

The crabs’ free claw swung disjointed.

When sunlight departed and darkness fell

The piper band summoned waves to swell.

The sea mythically chained to the moon’s tug

Rose to the height of a clothesline pinned rug.

In repetition the three piper’s tune did lose

The strength of the new in its silent repose.

Then too, the rally of rebellion was ever lost

As Fenian sons on coffin ships the sea tossed.

Never forgotten the fresh, strange rapture of joy

Always beholden if the heart met a broken toy.

When youth and dreams are old, out of sight.

No piper tune vanishes the villager’s plight.

The baggy eyes become sad and swollen.

Still so when the far sea dawn is golden.

Read additional Writer Donan Berg poetry at

More Writer Donan Berg poetry

Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel

Alexa's Gold

One Paper Heart

Saturday, August 14, 2021

A wish doesn't necessary happen

Any metric for measuring a writer's success is subject to many variables.

Selling books is an obvious.

That's why, I speculate, that AuthorsDen.com says "sell more books" to invite authors to purchase a membership. Obviously, they consulted lawyers to try not to create a legally recognized promise that an author who purchases a membership will sell "more books."

The subtle intent should be obvious. An author who joins a website wishes any offered payment will result in an upward increment in book sales.

Not always so.

AuthorsDen does not offer "testimonials." Perhaps that should be a signal to all who see joining them with cash will not result in an uptick in book sales.

The second part of incentive is that AuthorsDen will always say it was not their fault, but the author. Question? Then why do they accept the money.

The third part of the incentive for AuthorsDen is that it will rely upon authors not to broadcast any anemic sales because that pierces the author's façade of success.

This scenario was graciously hinted at in a 2014 Internet blog.

I have no inclination to shrink from the truth.  

My latest novel, Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel, has been the "most popular" novel on AuthorsDen for the past one hundred and thirty (130) days.

Best I can tell, AuthorsDen has been responsible for zero (yes, 0) book sales. Is that "more," obviously not.

If you're an author, you may want to take my experience into consideration for any marketing decision you make.

Could you say, my novel, Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel, was bad fantasy. I'd say, no.

And, I'm supported by the July Literary Titan Gold Award.

If you wish to test me, visit www.amazon.com for Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel, and read a sample.  Visit www.smashwords.com/books/view/1059934 and read a sample that extends to Chapter Four.


Wednesday, July 28, 2021

Donan Berg Novels Lead Popular List

 A fellow author once said, the best marker of your writing ability is the length of time your novels remain popular with readers and other authors.

With that in mind, I recorded on May 12, 2021, what novels of mine were listed as most popular at www.authorsden.com. Then, today, July 28, 2021, I checked to see what novels topped their most popular rankings. (Novels are ranked in order starting with number one.) This exercise is not strictly scientific, but here are the results for Donan Berg novels only:

May 12, 2021:

Top Fantasy                    Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel

Top Action/Thriller        Aria's Bayou Child

Top Mystery/Suspense  Into the Dark

Top Romance                Alexa's Gold

                                      Abbey Burning Love  

July 28, 2021:

Top Fantasy                    Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel

Top Action/Thriller        Aria's Bayou Child

Top Mystery/Suspense    Into the Dark

                                        Adolph's Gold

                                        Baby Bones

                                        A Body To Bones

                                        The Bones Dance Foxtrot

Top Romance                  One Paper Heart

                                        Abbey Burning Love

                                        Alexa's Gold

As an end note, Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel, became the top popular novel of all genres on April 16, 2021 and has remained there, that's 115 consecutive days.

Thank you all for your purchase, reading and support. If you click the below link you'll find sample chapters of all Donan Berg novels, plus writing tips, articles and short stories.

Click here to begin your own survey of  Donan Berg Novels.



 

Monday, July 19, 2021

Let the first sentence grab you

 All praise is not homegrown.

Readers, and especially critics, are blown away by a novel's first sentence.

There are classics. Think Jane Austin's Pride and Prejudice. 

I ran across an introductory sentence today that impressed me so much I had to share.

In Last Light by J.N. Bake, the opening sentence reads as follows:

"Hell. As I pried my sword from his life-less body, I was sure that's where I'd be going;

that was, if I could actually die."

Doesn't that tell you a lot, yet still draw you in?  It did me. A fantasy? Or, a delusional killer?

Why chose?  You must read on.  I haven't read the entire novel, but I'm intrigued.

I went back to look at my own novels. (Proud to say that the last two have had gold medals bestowed upon them. The first a most popular www.authorsden.com novel for 93 consecutive days.)

Alexa's Gold starts with:  "'Rich men don't date exhausted women.'" Grandma's oft-repeated admonition ebbed into the minutiae of Alexa Hovey's grief."

Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel starts with:  "Eta Dorcas pressed four fingertips into her right palm's flesh. She feared, if she looked, it could still be there."

One Paper Heart starts with: "The romantic flames of Alicia Danielson's sweet dreams flared into conscious panic."

Different genres please readers in multiple ways. For the author to gain that praise requires the reader to do one thing, i.e., read on with a sense of what comes next. That is, a fantasy, a romance, or a thriller with romantic elements.

It presents a tall order for the author. All readers may not have a critical vision when opening a novel, but below the surface there's an attraction. It benefits the author and the reader.   


Wednesday, July 7, 2021

Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel wins Gold Award

 Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel

Wins Literary Titan Gold Award

Just announced:  Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel, has won the July 2021 Literary Titan Gold Award.

(Note, a prior blog post presented their June 25 five-star book review of Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel.)

Literary Titan bestows its Gold Award on books found to be perfect in delivery of original content, meticulous development of unique characters in an organic and striking setting with an innovative plot that supports a fresh theme with words transformed into beautifully written prose.

Author Donan Berg was quoted as saying he was humbled and honored to be recognized by an organization of professional editors, writers, and professors with a passion for the written word.



 



Wednesday, June 30, 2021

Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel Five-Star Review

 Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel

 Find the Girl by Donan Berg immerses us in the whimsical story of Eta Dorcas. Eta’s world opens with a shocking discovery; after a trip to local caves with her grandma and younger sister Daria, Eta’s fingers suddenly begin to glow a bright blue. This shocks her – but she’s even more surprised to find that a creature has snuck into her backpack and escaped the cave with Eta and her family. We learn that the creature is a weasel who once lived as Eighteenth-Century Sailor, trapped in his animal form by a vicious curse.

 Find the Girl takes a magical turn into an expansive world where anything is possible. Eta and Ian, the boy-become-weasel, are suddenly entangled in a quest to free Ian from the curse that’s been put upon him by Greek seafarers. This quest leaves him with three important words: find the girl. We travel around the world and through time with the protagonists as they encounter different trials and creatures, challenging them to discover a cure for the curse before time runs out.

 This book was such a fun read. Eta’s voice is entertaining and joyful despite the strenuous trials she faces, and I loved seeing this magical world from her perspective. The bond she forms with Ian felt genuine and touching, and I found them both to be nuanced characters with relatable emotions among the fantastical setting. I enjoyed that the story left some open avenues where future tales could develop further from this intricate and well-constructed universe.

 I found the world presented in Find the Girl so unique. It was unlike any fantasy stories I’ve read previously, and I loved the specialized voice that came along with this brand-new view. However, I did find the beginning confusing as we’re thrust into this magical world without much description. Berg makes up for the heavy information by providing, detailed fantastical occurrences later in the story, as we meet new characters who give more context to the universe that’s been constructed.

 If you’re looking for a joyful and inspiring story that’s great for all ages, Find the Girl is your next perfect read. The story emphasizes how special it is to embrace wonder and change. It shows that when we care for one another and have the passion to help them, we might discover beautiful corners of the world along the way.

Literary Titan/Thomas Anderson

Literary Titan is an organization of professional editors, writers, and professors that have a passion for the written word.

Wednesday, June 2, 2021

Mystery versus Suspense. A writing Tip.

 Mystery versus suspense.

 Let’s differentiate the two in simple terms.

 Mystery concerns the past. There’s a body. Whodunit? This is a prime mystery example.

Suspense, on the other hand, concerns the future. What will happen? Who will be hurt?

 Your major character is about to lift a lid on a box.

 Is this mystery? Yes, if the box contains a clue.

Is this suspense? Yes, if the box has a poisonous snake ready to bite. But, and here’s the crucial point about suspense, the character must have an inkling a peril lurks.

How does that happen? Well, the writer could say the character faces death. But come on. That’s sophomoric, at best. There needs to be a build-up. The character’s boss may deal in poisonous snakes and this box returned from Egypt when the boss did. While the box may not say a poisonous snake is enclosed, perhaps the stamp of A.S.P. Co could be a foreshadowing? Maybe if the boss returned from the western USA, the character hears a rattle inside the box.

 The point for writers is: even if the character does not suspect to be hurt, the reader must be aware of potential adverse consequences for suspense to be created.

The reader must envision the possibilities. If the hero stands on the edge of a cliff, there’s no significant possibility he may fall, even die. If the hero stands there and a villain rushes towards him, the reader can assume the villain may push the hero. And, if that happens? The hero is in danger.

 As it has not yet happened, suspense can build. Add in a few other details, like the villain’s shout “you’ve breathed your last” or the hero’s foot slipping on a loose rock that cascades to the canyon floor below and there’s suspense.

 If you skip all that and a park ranger comes across a dead body on the floor of the canyon, well, we’re now dealing with mystery.

 Choose your approach. Yes, an unidentified villain can cause suspense by creating the death of a hapless individual and allow the story to migrate into a mystery.

This is a conscious choice. An author may choose. Yet, mystery and suspense live separate lives.

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Wednesday, May 12, 2021

Independent Website Honors Author Donan Berg with Firsts

 Independent website www.authorsden.com honored Author Donan Berg on May 12, 2021 with four top most popular ratings for four of his novels.

More than a week later on May 20, 2021, the most popular novels, yes, the top six in reader appeal at www.authorsden.com are written by Author Donan Berg.  They include the below listed four.  Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel, has been a top pick since April 16. A Body To Bones, his debut paperback novel that recently joined the e-book ranks, like cream, has risen to the top. 

Top fantasy - Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel

Top mystery/suspense - Into the Dark

Top action/thriller - Aria's Bayou Child

Top romance - Alexa's Gold (Author Berg's Abbey Burning Love earned a second.)

Click here to Find Donan Berg novels .

In a statement, Author Donan Berg said he couldn't be prouder of his readers. "They are the most important persons," he said.  "Honors are fantastic, but the underpinning is to write for the enjoyment of readers. That, in all humility, is best. To be a part in a win/win spurs my passion to write even better."

After his statement, word was received that a new five-star review has been issued into the literature world. Read a review of Aria's Bayou Child, A Thriller at www.featheredquill.com.


Friday, April 2, 2021

Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel, Ranks Most Popular

 Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel 

is now available on Amazon (ASIN B091FZBQTG)

in both E-book and paperback.

    It is free to all who have KindleUnlimited.

    Click to Purchase Find the Girl fantasy novel here

    Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel most popular.

    Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel has earned the Number One

ranking as the most popular in fantasy and all other genres since April 16, 2021.

    Click here to read a sample chapter Find the Girl, A Fantasy Novel sample.

    Or, read an excerpt in an earlier post on this blog site.




Monday, March 22, 2021

Writing tip : Ask yourself why?

 Multiple writers send out samples of their work and ask for comment. The writer expects compliments. Yet, criticism is received. This can be both good and bad. The focus for you, the writer, must be:

What are you asking for?

Is it to improve your writing? 

While writers may hope all feedback helps them improve, honest readers know they walk on eggshells when they express what they see as faults in the written word they have read. Readers assume you, the writer only want praise. And, loads of it.

This presents a conundrum. Bad prose will result in fewer sales. This inflicts greater sadness to the writer after the lack of praise.

For me the analogy is like Brussel sprouts.  I like them. Majority don't. Should I say so if thus predict the answer to be received will be a negative? Probably not. Should it be so for writing?  I think not.

So, you're the writer. How do you approach this?

Consider that the reason you're asking for honest feedback is that you're still learning to be a successful writer. Ask any bronco rider: Do you expect to get tossed to the arena dirt? The answer: yes.

As a writer, do you expect to be loved by every reader?  

If the bronco rider learns with every ride, shouldn't the writer learn by every critique?

The answer: yes.

Does pride blunt the learning experience? Yes, but only if you let it.

Take every reader response in stride. Weigh it. If a reader can find fault with you as a writer, why can't you as a writer find fault with the reader. Yes, you can. But, be objective. 

Be in control of what you write. If your words have unintended consequences, learn to be more precise. If your words strike a chord, but less than you expected, amplify with a sharper focus.

It's the interchange between writer and reader that strikes a harmonious chord.

Only by interacting can the writer find the common niche. The writer's and the reader's world, as expressed by the word, is enriching and better if in sync.


Friday, February 19, 2021

Coming Soon: Fantasy 'Find the Girl'

 Coming soon in 2021 from Author Donan Berg.

The countdown to a fantasy adventure has begun.

 Find the Girl

Seventh grader Eta Dorcas captures a weasel in an Iowa cave.

The weasel speaks.

      And, more.

      Eta’s fingertips glow blue and she dares not tell Dad, Grandma, sister Daria, nor brother Nathan.

Ian, a seventeen-year-old sailor in the 1800s, is cursed to live as a 21st Century weasel unless he collects the silver, gold, and pearl spelled out by an anagram: ‘Find the Girl.’

Eta doesn’t believe she has magical powers. Yet, she’s an empowering spirit as she and Ian propel themselves on three separate trips to 1859 Greece, Ireland and the Mississippi River. The adventures blend harrowing intrigue, bond-building, and enlightenment without romance as Ian’s collectibles are not freely given. Eta’s family dynamics build and reveal her empathy.


Read a sample:

Chapter One

Eta Dorcas feared that, if she looked at her fingers, it would still be there. Seated in a minivan’s second row, she twiddled her thumbs. After a peek, she prayed for a miracle.

“Are you buckled in?”

“Yes, Grandma.”

As Grandma drove toward home, Eta steadied her gaze on the crown of Daria’s head as her younger sister sat pinned to the family minivan front seat by the stretched seat harness.

“Mares’ tails and mackerel scales make lofty ships to carry low sails.”

“What’s that, Grandma?” Daria asked.

“Old saying your Grandpa often repeated ever since we meet to warn of foul weather coming.”

Eta had studied clouds in last year’s seventh grade. Her gaze beyond the minivan’s side window failed to discern or gather enough wispy threads to even imagine in the Eastern Iowa clouds the outline of a horse, any fish, or a 19th Century sailing ship. Swallowing hard, she stared at her right hand’s closed fist and the exposed knuckles that rested on her seated thigh.

She closed her eyes and counted inside her head.

When she reached ten, she opened her eyes and her right fist to expose her right hand fingertips to her full view.

She gasped. The skin beneath her four right-hand fingernails glowed blue. As if by magic, the blue tint had traveled from the right forefinger to her pinkie.

Her feeling no pain reminded her that five months ago her seventh-grade teacher, Miss Slayton, convinced all, except dorky Stephen Jessup, that in the vacuum of outer space a human’s scream wouldn’t be heard.

If Eta could peer through narrowed eyes into the future, would she one day be floating beyond the earth’s atmosphere in an astral plane, her skin aglow like stratosphere plasma? If she time-traveled into the 19th Century, would a pirate force her to walk the plank from a captured merchant clipper ship, condemned to Davy Jones’ Locker by a swirling sea?

Or, within the next thirty minutes, before they arrived home, would a tornado uplift the minivan, ala Dorothy, and propel her through the western horizon’s dense black clouds?

“Eta, you all right?” Grandma asked.

“Fine,” Eta lied. To convince Grandma she was, Eta asked, “Was Grandpa a sailor?”

“Aye.” Grandma chuckled. “True and true.”

Eta wiggled her left-hand forefinger. Unable to stop the blue pigment from discoloring the pale flesh beneath her unpainted fingernail, a deepening dread engulfed Eta that she’d either be an Avatar, a Smurf, or dead within the week.

Daria asked, “Did I ever know Grandpa?”

“No, dear. Before either of you were born, no diver found him after his boat swamped near Ross Island, Ireland.”

Eta, locked into her own evolving catastrophe, haphazardly listened to, but did not join, the front-seat conversation.

“Did you live in Ireland, Grandma?”

“No. We lived outside Athens, near the port. Grandpa sailed the Mediterranean Sea and the Atlantic to the British Isles.”

“Was he a pirate?”

Grandma chuckled a second time. “No, no. Just a sailor who I’ll always remember for sending me a lovely pearl necklace.”

“Will you show it to me?”

Eta watched Grandma shake her head.

“Sorry to say,” Grandma whispered, “Lost it. Wanted to pass it on to your mother, but, then one day, discovered I’d misplaced the necklace and then . . . and then your mother passed.”

“I remember Mom wore pearls.”

“Daria, honey, let’s save this for another day.”

Eta agreed as she continued to stare at her cupped fingers. Why did the creepy blue glow skip her thumbs? Would the blue disappear if she scrubbed her fingertips with a toothbrush loaded up with hand sanitizer after she arrived home?

Since today was Daria’s birthday, Grandma granted her ten-year-old granddaughter two wishes. The first was a Saturday trip to the Mississippi River caves near Dubuque, Iowa, and the second, a round-trip privilege to sit in the front passenger seat.

For once, Eta didn’t whine on the trip home about having to buckle into the middle seat for it made it easier to hide her fingertip’s blue glow since older brother Nathan had begged to stay home while Dad left the farm for work.

Eta bent head and shoulders forward to escape Grandma’s rearview mirror detection as she let both lips seal her left forefinger within her mouth. Since a hard suck didn’t result in dizziness, she sucked again without breaking the seal of her lips.

“Eta, you ill?”

Grandma’s inquiry ignited a shudder within and through Eta’s nervous system. Eta’s lips released her finger. “There’s a bug on the floor.”

“Stomp it.”

Eta’s right sneaker kicked the seatback in front of her. “Got it.” Her second lie, she believed, no less punishable than her first.

Thank you for your read. The full story of Eta's fantastic voyage coming soon.

Click this link to learn about the Find the Girl preorder



Thursday, January 7, 2021

Writing Tip: Not Your Protagonist

 Writing tip.

There are a multitude of protagonists. Those that should not grace your story are

the following:

    1. The incompetent.

    2. The passive.

    3.  The over thinker.

The hero or heroine must not only do things, but must drive the story's plot. The above three types of hero or heroine are failures. 

How can a good mystery be solved if the protagonist has no detecting skill? He or she can't.

How can a story be entertaining if the protagonist sits in the audience waiting for the action on stage when he or she should be the lead actor on the stage reciting witty lines, tapping out innovative dance steps or pouring out a wheelbarrow full of emotion.

How can a good story be only in one's head. Yes, a hero or heroine can dream, or plot out their next actions, but the energy rays are ignited by outward actions, not small electrical impulses only alive within the protagonist's skull.

Measure the story you're writing or reading against the above. There's a trust you'll enjoy yourself more if you find the kernel and discard the chaff.