Friday, February 19, 2021

Coming Soon: Fantasy 'Find the Girl'

 Coming soon in 2021 from Author Donan Berg.

The countdown to a fantasy adventure has begun.

 Find the Girl

Seventh grader Eta Dorcas captures a weasel in an Iowa cave.

The weasel speaks.

      And, more.

      Eta’s fingertips glow blue and she dares not tell Dad, Grandma, sister Daria, nor brother Nathan.

Ian, a seventeen-year-old sailor in the 1800s, is cursed to live as a 21st Century weasel unless he collects the silver, gold, and pearl spelled out by an anagram: ‘Find the Girl.’

Eta doesn’t believe she has magical powers. Yet, she’s an empowering spirit as she and Ian propel themselves on three separate trips to 1859 Greece, Ireland and the Mississippi River. The adventures blend harrowing intrigue, bond-building, and enlightenment without romance as Ian’s collectibles are not freely given. Eta’s family dynamics build and reveal her empathy.


Read a sample:

Chapter One

Eta Dorcas feared that, if she looked at her fingers, it would still be there. Seated in a minivan’s second row, she twiddled her thumbs. After a peek, she prayed for a miracle.

“Are you buckled in?”

“Yes, Grandma.”

As Grandma drove toward home, Eta steadied her gaze on the crown of Daria’s head as her younger sister sat pinned to the family minivan front seat by the stretched seat harness.

“Mares’ tails and mackerel scales make lofty ships to carry low sails.”

“What’s that, Grandma?” Daria asked.

“Old saying your Grandpa often repeated ever since we meet to warn of foul weather coming.”

Eta had studied clouds in last year’s seventh grade. Her gaze beyond the minivan’s side window failed to discern or gather enough wispy threads to even imagine in the Eastern Iowa clouds the outline of a horse, any fish, or a 19th Century sailing ship. Swallowing hard, she stared at her right hand’s closed fist and the exposed knuckles that rested on her seated thigh.

She closed her eyes and counted inside her head.

When she reached ten, she opened her eyes and her right fist to expose her right hand fingertips to her full view.

She gasped. The skin beneath her four right-hand fingernails glowed blue. As if by magic, the blue tint had traveled from the right forefinger to her pinkie.

Her feeling no pain reminded her that five months ago her seventh-grade teacher, Miss Slayton, convinced all, except dorky Stephen Jessup, that in the vacuum of outer space a human’s scream wouldn’t be heard.

If Eta could peer through narrowed eyes into the future, would she one day be floating beyond the earth’s atmosphere in an astral plane, her skin aglow like stratosphere plasma? If she time-traveled into the 19th Century, would a pirate force her to walk the plank from a captured merchant clipper ship, condemned to Davy Jones’ Locker by a swirling sea?

Or, within the next thirty minutes, before they arrived home, would a tornado uplift the minivan, ala Dorothy, and propel her through the western horizon’s dense black clouds?

“Eta, you all right?” Grandma asked.

“Fine,” Eta lied. To convince Grandma she was, Eta asked, “Was Grandpa a sailor?”

“Aye.” Grandma chuckled. “True and true.”

Eta wiggled her left-hand forefinger. Unable to stop the blue pigment from discoloring the pale flesh beneath her unpainted fingernail, a deepening dread engulfed Eta that she’d either be an Avatar, a Smurf, or dead within the week.

Daria asked, “Did I ever know Grandpa?”

“No, dear. Before either of you were born, no diver found him after his boat swamped near Ross Island, Ireland.”

Eta, locked into her own evolving catastrophe, haphazardly listened to, but did not join, the front-seat conversation.

“Did you live in Ireland, Grandma?”

“No. We lived outside Athens, near the port. Grandpa sailed the Mediterranean Sea and the Atlantic to the British Isles.”

“Was he a pirate?”

Grandma chuckled a second time. “No, no. Just a sailor who I’ll always remember for sending me a lovely pearl necklace.”

“Will you show it to me?”

Eta watched Grandma shake her head.

“Sorry to say,” Grandma whispered, “Lost it. Wanted to pass it on to your mother, but, then one day, discovered I’d misplaced the necklace and then . . . and then your mother passed.”

“I remember Mom wore pearls.”

“Daria, honey, let’s save this for another day.”

Eta agreed as she continued to stare at her cupped fingers. Why did the creepy blue glow skip her thumbs? Would the blue disappear if she scrubbed her fingertips with a toothbrush loaded up with hand sanitizer after she arrived home?

Since today was Daria’s birthday, Grandma granted her ten-year-old granddaughter two wishes. The first was a Saturday trip to the Mississippi River caves near Dubuque, Iowa, and the second, a round-trip privilege to sit in the front passenger seat.

For once, Eta didn’t whine on the trip home about having to buckle into the middle seat for it made it easier to hide her fingertip’s blue glow since older brother Nathan had begged to stay home while Dad left the farm for work.

Eta bent head and shoulders forward to escape Grandma’s rearview mirror detection as she let both lips seal her left forefinger within her mouth. Since a hard suck didn’t result in dizziness, she sucked again without breaking the seal of her lips.

“Eta, you ill?”

Grandma’s inquiry ignited a shudder within and through Eta’s nervous system. Eta’s lips released her finger. “There’s a bug on the floor.”

“Stomp it.”

Eta’s right sneaker kicked the seatback in front of her. “Got it.” Her second lie, she believed, no less punishable than her first.

Thank you for your read. The full story of Eta's fantastic voyage coming soon.

Click this link to learn about the Find the Girl preorder



Thursday, January 7, 2021

Writing Tip: Not Your Protagonist

 Writing tip.

There are a multitude of protagonists. Those that should not grace your story are

the following:

    1. The incompetent.

    2. The passive.

    3.  The over thinker.

The hero or heroine must not only do things, but must drive the story's plot. The above three types of hero or heroine are failures. 

How can a good mystery be solved if the protagonist has no detecting skill? He or she can't.

How can a story be entertaining if the protagonist sits in the audience waiting for the action on stage when he or she should be the lead actor on the stage reciting witty lines, tapping out innovative dance steps or pouring out a wheelbarrow full of emotion.

How can a good story be only in one's head. Yes, a hero or heroine can dream, or plot out their next actions, but the energy rays are ignited by outward actions, not small electrical impulses only alive within the protagonist's skull.

Measure the story you're writing or reading against the above. There's a trust you'll enjoy yourself more if you find the kernel and discard the chaff.  

Thursday, December 17, 2020

Special Year-End Savings

 To celebrate the end of 2020, three Author Donan Berg e-books will be discounted Fifty (50) per cent.

A fourth will be double that, i.e., Amanda will be free.

The discount period begins tomorrow, Friday, December 18, 2020, and ends December 31, 2020.

All e-books are at Smashwords.com . 

Your discounted price will be applied at checkout. You need take no additional steps, for example, knowing a coupon code. Thus, your checking out with one of these special e-books will be no mystery, even if the books are.

Here's the links to the e-books featured above:

www.smashwords.com/books/view/398225 (Adolph's Gold)

www.smashwords.com/books/view/500753 (The Bones Dance Foxtrot)

www.smashwords.com/books/view/1042160 (A Body To Bones)

www.smashwords.com/books/view/405595 (Amanda)

  🎅  Happy Holidays. Please Enjoy.

Wednesday, July 8, 2020

Special Preorder: Aria's Bayou Child, a thriller by Author Donan Berg

Preorder before September 2020 general release

Aria's Bayou Child e-book is available in multiple formats at this link:  www.smashwords.com/books/view/1031889 or click here.


Author Donan Berg's latest novel, Aria's Bayou Child, A Thriller, will be available at retailers this September 2020 in e-book and paperback.

Here's a descriptive preview:

Aria Gleason battles the unexpected and endures untold physical pain and mental torture in her search for her bayou-born child. She learns no motherless child flourishes and no mother's journey embraces sanity until she breaks the chains of false imprisonment and hugs a beating heart to her breast.

After she's paroled, Aria's life becomes an obsession to find her stolen child. Action packed and suspenseful, readers will keep turning pages. A prison guard who knows the disturbing truth strives to persuade, and then threatens, Aria to abandon her child.

Driven to succeed, Aria has only her resolve to go with the GED certificate she earned in prison. Aria's Bayou Child  explores themes of maternal love, friendship and family tied together with gripping suspense in true thriller fashion.

Live the terror no mother should bear. Inspired by true events. Aria is a young mother whose travails and triumph are richly drawn in a world of derring-do that unfolds a dastardly scheme. Her every belief will be challenged and shaken.

Be mesmerized by Author Donan Berg, a First Place Gold Award winner.

Aria's Bayou Child set to be released in September 2020.

Your copy awaits. Act today to pre-order. 

Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Author Donan Berg e-books on sale.

E-books by Author Donan Berg discounted 25 to 50% at www.smashwords.com.

These discounts will last for a limited time.

Thank you to all who visit.  All e-books available.  Free samples..

Your review is appreciated.

.E-books include Donan Berg's Gold Award First Place Romance, "One Paper Heart."

For exact details, visit Donan Berg e-books .

Thursday, July 18, 2019

Five-star review of Donan Berg's novel Into the Dark


A Complex Mystery That Keeps You Guessing

Very late in Donan Berg's  exciting crime mystery Into the Dark, a line metaphorically serves as emblematic of our protagonist's quest for what often appears to be the murkiest of truths: "His weakened flashlight batteries strained to illuminate the unknown."

From the exciting opening, Donan Berg's Into the Dark relentlessly builds a thrilling mystery centering around election tampering, a stack of money, a counterfeiting operation, and a dead body. In order to reveal the truth, Sheriff Jonas McHugh finds himself compulsively returning to a rustic cabin with hidden compartments and trap doors and to a cave that is the source of more than its share of secrets and disturbing activity. As Jonas simultaneously investigates the money and counterfeiting issues, the election fraud angle, and the death of operative Ed Telling, the reader follows along; plot threads first complicate and then eventually align to great satisfaction.

Methodically and doggedly, Jonas edges toward insight. "Bonnie's statement of the obvious unleashed within Jonas a mental lightning bolt to illuminate what had been dark." A novel smartly riddled with Biblical quotes and allusions, Into the Dark follows Jonas's journey toward enlightenment, one that paradoxically will send him into a fair share of hellish, subterranean places.

At the heart of the mystery is the beautiful, mercurial Kayla, for whom Jonas possesses contrary feelings of attraction and mistrust. Her presence and Iowa's political environment's home of high-stake caucuses inform the novel with layers of compromised motivations and machinations.
Throughout Berg peppers the story with terse phrasing that echoes Jonas's mindset: "Telling's killer is still free. Bogus bills infest Silver County wallets. Unfed, unclothed teens flood rural roads."

Berg's skillful sorting out Jonas's complicated thoughts as he reaches disturbing conclusions makes Into the Dark a smart, engaging novel.
Michael Hartnett, author of The Blue Rat.


Friday, May 31, 2019

Sheriff Jonas McHugh returns in Into the Dark

Sheriff Jonas McHugh returns in June 2019 with a new troubles.

At a rural cabin owned by a Silver County political widow Jonas discovers
an Iowa Caucus ballot box filled with U.S. currency the day after the caucus
vote shows eight GOP precincts untabulated and the cast ballots missing.

A torn note threatens a bomb plot. One presidential hopeful campaign manager
lays murdered as Jonas faces the barrel of a loaded thirty-ought-six rifle.

Jonas unravels sinister and human motives far greater than greed and power.

Known for entertaining mystery and heartwarming romance, Author Berg infuses
suspense into mystery with a page-turner plot. Sharp prose with more than one
meaning hones and deepens the robust dialogue of well-drawn, rounded characters.

Coming June 25, 2019. Into the Dark will be in Trade Paperback and E-book.
Expect preorders to be available.